Monday, 30 May 2016

The Candy Land Disaster



It was just another day in Candy Kingdom for Princess Bubblegum. She was in the garden planting the Bubble gum mushrooms until she heard a noise in the bushes. Two things popped out of the bush they seemed to be a human named Finn and a dog named Jake. She thought in her mind how did they get here.


Just a second later she opened her eyes they were gone…

Princess Bubblegum heard screaming it was coming from the candy kindy it was Finn and Jake they were eating the candy kids.  Princess Bubblegum and the parents were frightened they were crying...

Princess Bubblegum called Rainbow Unicorn so she could remake the candy kids. Rainbow Unicorn did what she had too.

In return Princess Bubblegum made more magic for Rainbow Unicorn.
       

3 comments:

  1. Great I like how you sort of copied from the movie I like how you put some oomph in your writing.
    Also I like how you sort gave me lots of describing for your character.

    It was just another day in Candy Kingdom for Princess Bubblegum. She was in the garden planting the Bubble gum mushrooms

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  2. very cool story I hope you make more like it

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  3. Hey that was very close describing to the programme and I like how you added lots of fun words. Keep up the good work. Ka pai!!

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