"This is a record of my learning during my time at Mangonui School. Ka Kite Ano!"
Thursday, 11 June 2015
The Sizzling Hot Day
The Sizzling Hot Day
Sparrows were singing beautifully in the distance.
The sun was sizzling in the blue sapphire sky.
He saw The tall green trees swaying side to side in the light windy breeze.
He couldn't move a muscle because he felt so relaxed.
He was wondering "How am I going to have enough strength to get off my lazy butt and catch some delicious fish"
By Shayla-jade,Tatum,Hunna,Nevaeh,Ella
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I liked the way you wrote down the sun was sizzling in the blue sapphire sky.And how you said light windy breeze.
ReplyDeleteIts always good to get in a groop and rite a story to gether.
ReplyDeleteI like all your adjective too.